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\枫雪轮回<<【征文】《Goodbye My Love》(超短篇)

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1楼2012-08-11 19:08回复
    “You mean,you will go back to Paris next week?”马丽娜显然惊讶于这个刚刚得到的消息,迪兰居然马上就要回巴黎了,而且是在抛弃他的心血结晶银鹰队的前提下。


    2楼2012-08-11 19:09
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      “Ya,Marina. I can not stay in America any more. My family needs me.”迪兰抿抿嘴,说出了令自己最心痛的话语。为了家族的事业,他这个沉迷于YOYO的play boy,也要回归到正当的道路,毕竟,YOYO不能当饭吃。他的人生早已被布局好了,看上去似乎精彩,却是法兰克福家的世世代代走腻了的道路。不过这样的道路却能够确保法兰克福家族的辉煌。此时的迪兰就像是撞上了蜘蛛网的飞虫,无论如何,也无法挣脱蜘蛛网的束缚,只能眼睁睁地看着自己被蜘蛛吃掉。


      3楼2012-08-11 19:09
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        “But,Deland. Not only your family,we need you,too!Our team needs you!Argent-Eagle needs you!”马丽娜做着最后的挽留,哪怕有一丁点可能,她也要挽留迪兰,挽留......她所爱的人。


        4楼2012-08-11 19:10
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          “Marina,listen. I have no choices,go back,or die. Jack will be the next team leader. I'm really sorry ahout this. ”迪兰扶住马丽娜的肩膀,一脸淡定,但是,此时此刻,他的心痛已经无法言表,无法忍受。即使如此,他也要回去。家人曾经拿着马丽娜的生命要挟自己,而她却浑然不知。迪兰暗自惊讶,是什么样的实力能让一向警觉的马丽娜浑然不知?


          5楼2012-08-11 19:11
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            马丽娜痴痴地望着迪兰,有那么两三秒,她想杀了他,这个两次抛弃了队伍的野兽,但当她看见迪兰那坚定和温柔的目光时,一切的恩恩怨怨都化为了云烟。
            她转过去,隐藏住自己的泪水,“Okay,you can go to any where you want. And forget all the things ahout Argent-Eagle,YOYO,and......me. Goodbye,I never remember a boy called Deland.”迪兰怔住了,他万万没有想到,丽娜会这样对待自己。“Marina,don't be like this. Do you still remember the first time we met?I saved you. You said you would remember me forever.”


            6楼2012-08-11 19:12
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              ”But now everything is changing!How can I remember a bad, irresponsible person?You saved me,it's a truth. But you will leave us,it's another truth!”马丽娜眼圈红红的,语气听起来非常生气。她知道,无论自己如何的挽留,迪兰还是会离去,就像上次去中国一样。自己带着队友们不惜掀起风波,去中国为他报仇,他却把大家训了一顿。究竟......是我对你迷恋太深,还是你对我无情太真?”I don't want to leave all of you,but......”迪兰没有说下去,他不能让丽娜知道自己是为了她。如果丽娜知道了,按照她的做法,她一定会跟着自己回法国。家族里太阴险、太狡诈,需要踏着别人的尸体前行。他不会把她带入那样的世界。迪兰无奈地摇了摇头,走了出去。他在逃避,如果这样下去,他知道,自己走不了了。


              7楼2012-08-11 19:13
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                马丽娜苦笑。她突然有一种想要追上迪兰的冲动,抱住他,告诉他,如果自己一直深爱着他,他会为了自己而留下吗?但是后来她打消了这个念头,那只不过是自己的自作多情罢了。他怎么可能为了微不足道的自己改变巨大的决定?那天是立秋之日,秋风为他们的爱举行了惊天动地的葬礼,爱,消失了就是消失了,没有理由。


                8楼2012-08-11 19:14
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                  Goodbye -------Avril Lavigne
                  Goodbye,goodbye,goodbye my love.
                  Can't hide, can't hide,can't hide what has come.
                  I have to go,I have to go,I have to go and leave you alone.
                  But always know,always know,always know that I love you so,I love you so.
                  Goodbye,brown eyes,goodbye for now.
                  Goodbye,sunshine,take care of yourself.
                  I have to go,I have to go,I have to go and leave you alone.
                  But always know,always know,always know that I love you so,I love you so.
                  Lullaby,strike me with your eyes,lullaby.
                  Lullaby,help me sleep tonight,lullaby.
                  I have to go,I have to go,I have to go and leave you alone.
                  But always know,always know,always know that I love you so,I love you so.


                  9楼2012-08-11 19:15
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                    靠,最烦这么发文了。我全篇上下看了一遍,没有一个会被【和谐】的字。凭什么吞我啊。
                    还有,各位亲,如果英语有什么错误的话,请提出来,本人会积极改正的....


                    10楼2012-08-11 19:16
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                      @维尔利特の维J 求精,当然,如果你觉得好的话。


                      11楼2012-08-11 19:18
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                        @.@眼睛都看晕了这么多英语。。。


                        来自手机贴吧13楼2012-08-11 20:37
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                          还好下面有翻译。。。你是怎么做到的


                          来自手机贴吧14楼2012-08-12 07:14
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                            靠···写得很好啊


                            15楼2012-08-16 13:41
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                              嗨,习惯了···总之,写得很好啊,对咯,还写不写了


                              16楼2012-08-17 12:25
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