额,反正我知道里面语法用词错误肯定一大堆啦,不过档口语看还是可以的吧
Some of my classmates know that lastweek's friday l went to ShangHai coz have a chance to see my idol wallace chung. I know many people think i am crazy so,today i want tell you why i love him.
Wallace was born in 1974 in HK.And look at this pictur ,perhaps some girles in our classroom know him.It's MuRongFeng who he acted 3 years ago .The TV play named too late to say love you.Wallace tell us a wonderful love story and makes many femal cry.
But he have many other classical roles.
We fans imagine a village:ZhongJiaCun and people who live in there ,is the role which Wallace acted.We guess that,Wallace is the village head.While all the fans want to pay a visite to there and villagers live there happliy.
I know,most of you do not know Wallace also a singer ,but actually music is his dream. He likes dancing and singing.But unfortunately coz of the dificulties of life he can not dangce in the stage for five years.
However what he did in this time is the reason why i love him for many years.
He never gives up ”if you choose the right way,distance did not a problem”This is what he said. Finally he achieved his dream:hold his frist concert in 2011 in ShangHai.It is his optimistic and struggle makes me follwed him for more than 5 years.
And this photo is special it was take by myslef in 316 .The frist time i see him .
While in the end i want to say:Wallace you are my teacher my idol forever 2014, i want join in you vocal concernt
Some of my classmates know that lastweek's friday l went to ShangHai coz have a chance to see my idol wallace chung. I know many people think i am crazy so,today i want tell you why i love him.
Wallace was born in 1974 in HK.And look at this pictur ,perhaps some girles in our classroom know him.It's MuRongFeng who he acted 3 years ago .The TV play named too late to say love you.Wallace tell us a wonderful love story and makes many femal cry.
But he have many other classical roles.
We fans imagine a village:ZhongJiaCun and people who live in there ,is the role which Wallace acted.We guess that,Wallace is the village head.While all the fans want to pay a visite to there and villagers live there happliy.
I know,most of you do not know Wallace also a singer ,but actually music is his dream. He likes dancing and singing.But unfortunately coz of the dificulties of life he can not dangce in the stage for five years.
However what he did in this time is the reason why i love him for many years.
He never gives up ”if you choose the right way,distance did not a problem”This is what he said. Finally he achieved his dream:hold his frist concert in 2011 in ShangHai.It is his optimistic and struggle makes me follwed him for more than 5 years.
And this photo is special it was take by myslef in 316 .The frist time i see him .
While in the end i want to say:Wallace you are my teacher my idol forever 2014, i want join in you vocal concernt