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Post this post to improve my writing skill in English,maybe have many error,if you have found it,please told me


IP属地:湖南来自iPhone客户端1楼2013-10-16 17:26回复
    Today is very boring.I totally have two classes today.So I spend most time in library.However,in the library,I don't study,instead I play my cell-phone and read novels.I try to study,but I failed.Today is useless.Well,tomorrow is another day.Hope I'll full use my time in studying tomorrow.


    IP属地:湖南来自iPhone客户端2楼2013-10-16 17:32
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      Wish I can insist on writing this diary


      IP属地:湖南来自iPhone客户端3楼2013-10-16 17:38
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        If I insist,success will be available


        IP属地:湖南来自iPhone客户端4楼2013-10-16 17:49
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          渣渣


          IP属地:北京来自iPhone客户端5楼2013-10-17 00:18
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            Even though Yujie laughed at me,I would still insist writing dairy .


            IP属地:湖南来自iPhone客户端6楼2013-10-17 13:02
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              How can I let my article be better?


              IP属地:湖南来自iPhone客户端7楼2013-10-17 14:42
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                @josonlee123 You can read this post sometimes,and point out where I'm wrong.It's much better that you can tell me how to amend it


                IP属地:湖南来自iPhone客户端8楼2013-10-17 14:46
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                  @josonlee123 You can write something tooSo that I can understand how to write better by reading your article.


                  IP属地:湖南来自iPhone客户端9楼2013-10-17 15:39
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                    I found writing is funnyEspecially in English


                    IP属地:湖南来自iPhone客户端10楼2013-10-17 15:40
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                      Ok,Let's start to write my dairy.Today is much better than yesterday.I totally have five classes today.They all in the morning.
                      In the morning ,I'm so sleepy.Due to this,I slept after my alarm clock rang several times.And when I woke up,It was 7:30I did everything quick in order to have breakfast.
                      Today,we had an experiment about automatic control theory .I did it very quick,and other classmates asked me for helpIt made me very glad and made me feel I have the talent in computer again
                      In the afternoon,I still learnt by myself in the library.And I do learn something rather than waste my time
                      Writing is so hard.I don't how to express correctly.Maybe it's need practice.I believe my English will be better and better!Fighting!


                      IP属地:湖南来自iPhone客户端11楼2013-10-17 16:08
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                        Everyday I told myself I'm gifted


                        IP属地:湖南来自iPhone客户端12楼2013-10-17 18:48
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                          All in all,I'm happy today


                          IP属地:湖南来自iPhone客户端13楼2013-10-17 18:49
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                            I don't wanna to care about Sara and her company any more.I wanna to be a passer-by.However,every time some bad thing happen to Sara,I'll turn to bacteria again


                            IP属地:湖南来自iPhone客户端14楼2013-10-17 18:54
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                              这个帖子好有趣,就跟修改病句一样,@josonlee123 御姐来几篇范文嘛~


                              来自Android客户端15楼2013-10-18 08:23
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