自己写了几首歌希望大神谱曲。ps我喜欢Dp三年了哈，最近才关注贴吧的，这是第一首，另外的看图片
MR.LEE
Meeting you on the lonely street
You said hello to me
Oh my pretty lady
So long haven*t met ,things are getting strange
You sent your Teller P to me
Said i would love it like loving Mr.Lee
Oh my Mr.Lee who always makes me cry
The man will leave then sacrifice for another lady
yap...I*m just a naive girl but you are Mr.Lee
All i have are not here
So my lady and Mr.Lee please tell me
Where i should be and where belongs to me
Let me follow the sun ,follow the ocean ,follow what i need.........
MR.LEE
Meeting you on the lonely street
You said hello to me
Oh my pretty lady
So long haven*t met ,things are getting strange
You sent your Teller P to me
Said i would love it like loving Mr.Lee
Oh my Mr.Lee who always makes me cry
The man will leave then sacrifice for another lady
yap...I*m just a naive girl but you are Mr.Lee
All i have are not here
So my lady and Mr.Lee please tell me
Where i should be and where belongs to me
Let me follow the sun ,follow the ocean ,follow what i need.........
不敢谱曲啊 之前尝试接过一个 结果一笔都没动。。
不过给楼主个好评 韵脚什么的都掌握的很好啊！
有没有大神 快来快来！
