这里已经变成我的小仓库啦
As we know, A person will make countless choices through his whole life. In fact,most choices may effect nothing like what to eat for dinner or which hand do I choose to pick my nose, but some choices are so important that may change your whole life.
Like Shakespeare ever said “To be or not to be,that is a question”.Many people have difficulties in making choices even if it is a very small thing.Because we always want to make a best choice but are afraid to afford the result if we choose the wrong one. When we were children,our parents helped us to make choices, but now, we are adults and have to choose by ourselves.
And here comes the question,how can we make a better choice when the choice may change our life? I think we can make the better choice by following these ways.
First,we should know enough about the choice and what it may change. For example,go to work or study further? You must konw enough about them and list the advantages and disadvantages.Then you can make your choice by combining to your own condition.Second, DO NOT make your choice by following others.You only see Bill Gates quit his college and become a legend but you don’t see billions of people quit their colleage but do nothing. So you know,all the books about success in the world is bullshit. Last but not the least, ask your teachers,parents and friends who know you for advice.This isn’t contradicted against the second advice , sometimes your own idea will be one-sided,and the advice of others will give you more inspiration.
That’s all my point that I want to share with you. Choice means change , a better choice may help you avoid making many detours. Making your every important choice carefully, and if you choose the wrong way,don’t be afraid, believe in yourself and work harder,you will finally make a success.
需要调整结构，将中心段落分成若干段来写，每段要有topical sentence
As we know, A person will make countless choices through his whole life. In fact,most choices may effect nothing like what to eat for dinner or which hand do I choose to pick my nose, but some choices are so important that may change your whole life.
Like Shakespeare ever said “To be or not to be,that is a question”.Many people have difficulties in making choices even if it is a very small thing.Because we always want to make a best choice but are afraid to afford the result if we choose the wrong one. When we were children,our parents helped us to make choices, but now, we are adults and have to choose by ourselves.
And here comes the question,how can we make a better choice when the choice may change our life? I think we can make the better choice by following these ways.
First,we should know enough about the choice and what it may change. For example,go to work or study further? You must konw enough about them and list the advantages and disadvantages.Then you can make your choice by combining to your own condition.Second, DO NOT make your choice by following others.You only see Bill Gates quit his college and become a legend but you don’t see billions of people quit their colleage but do nothing. So you know,all the books about success in the world is bullshit. Last but not the least, ask your teachers,parents and friends who know you for advice.This isn’t contradicted against the second advice , sometimes your own idea will be one-sided,and the advice of others will give you more inspiration.
That’s all my point that I want to share with you. Choice means change , a better choice may help you avoid making many detours. Making your every important choice carefully, and if you choose the wrong way,don’t be afraid, believe in yourself and work harder,you will finally make a success.
需要调整结构，将中心段落分成若干段来写，每段要有topical sentence
