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写了两天但是写的好像还是有些生硬。

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嗯就是这样我还是汉语功底比较深


IP属地:美国1楼2015-04-24 04:25回复
    For Shore
    I come form somewhere across the sea
    Across the ocean
    Across the world.
    Stand,
    Feel.
    Then,
    Smile.
    I love every piece of you.
    Mermaid’s Tear
    Shining in the breeze.
    Freeze.
    And stay in my memory.
    Never meet the gorgeous of the ocean.
    Stand by you,
    Gaze the sunrise,
    And ask,
    Whether I love you
    For shore.
    See? Sure.


    IP属地:美国2楼2015-04-24 04:26
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      难道没有发现根本没人么


      IP属地:四川来自Android客户端3楼2015-06-04 14:14
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        我偶尔也会来逛逛的。。。


        IP属地:湖北来自Android客户端4楼2015-06-20 00:59
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          这是得奖诗的draft


          IP属地:美国来自iPhone客户端7楼2015-12-23 17:02
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            这个逼我给十分


            来自iPhone客户端8楼2016-01-14 04:56
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