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    南宫问天:星岛国的皇子,英俊潇洒,有正义感再一次旅游中和铁心相识,并相爱。结为夫妻生下一女名天心。  
    东方铁心:月岛国的小公主,活泼 聪明 伶俐,漂亮可爱美丽、闭月羞花、她的心很善良。小时侯与姐姐走散,流落野外。好心人收养并认为义女,后与问天相爱。与父母相认。  
    北冥雪:月岛国的大公主,外貌美丽可爱,因为从小父母宠着,有点大小姐脾气。虽然有时会嫉妒人,但心地善良。一会喜欢问天,一会喜欢阿雷,老拿不定主意。  
    北冥雷:星岛国问天的表哥,长得帅气,为人沉着,冷静,做事认真。非常照顾问天,有一种大哥的风范。起初喜欢铁心,因铁心不爱他。与阿雪相处久了,渐渐的爱上了阿雪。  



1楼2008-07-10 13:30回复
    第五章: 
     今天一大早,我们(第五章中例外:问天是第一人称)出发了,大家朝着一个方向前进,相信我们一定能走出去的,还有神兵兽和我们一起呢! 
     走了很久,大家都口渴了。突然,看到前面有条小溪,溪水十分的清澈,可以喝。阿雪再也忍不住了,跑上前去喝水,因为水边的泥土很滑,所以阿雪不小心滑了下去。她突然大叫:“啊!”“姐姐”铁心说。幸好问天反应快,一把抓住了阿雪,她才没有被水冲下去。 
    阿雪:“好险啊,问天谢谢你!”不知怎么,阿雪脸红了,望着问天那张脸。她赶紧把视线从问天身上离开。 
    问天:“你没事吧!阿雪!” 
    阿雪:“我......我没事....问....问天,谢谢...你救了我......”阿雪越说越小声。这时,她已经察觉到,自己喜欢问天了。可她并不知道问天喜欢的是她妹妹——铁心。(当然,连问天自己也不知道) 
    铁心:“姐姐,你没事吧!小心点。” 
    阿雪:“嗯,我没事,糟了泥水把溪水弄脏了。” 
    铁心:“没关系,溪水冲一会就干净了!” 
    问天拿一个水瓶装了点水,路上备用。铁心、阿雷也学着问天装了点水,只有阿雪还在那儿“拼命”的喝水,身怕没水喝。这回好了,和撑着了,走不动了。每办法,只能坐下来休息一会了。 
    阿雷:“这么坐着也不是办法呀,早点走早点出去。” 
    问天:“好吧,我们出发!” 
    天慢慢暗下来,到了黄昏,可问天等人还没有走出森林,连边都看不到。但他们并没有放弃,继续他们的‘旅程’。时间一分一秒的过去,但对问天他们来说却非常漫长。“不行了,我走不动了。”阿雪精疲力尽地说。阿雷不耐烦了:“我的大小姐啊!休息得最多的人是你,最先喊累的人也是你。铁心比你小,比你能干!”“我当然知道她比我小,要不她怎么叫我姐姐呢!”“所以说啊!”“阿雷,你们俩别吵了。”“那问天你说该怎么办!”问天没办法:“阿雪,上来我背你!”不知怎么,铁心的心里有种说不出的滋味,憋在心里很难受。阿雪则心里非常高兴,她没想到,自己喜欢的男生竟然会主动背自己,莫非......问天喜欢上自己了?(阿雪有点‘痴心妄想’诶!)她越想越兴奋。(但有可能让她失望哦)在问天的背上睡着了。 
    “啊!”突然,铁心大叫一声。问天一急,不小心把手一松。“哎哟!问天你怎么搞的,疼死我了!”因为问天背着阿雪.......所以.....“不好意思,我是不小心的!因为铁心突然大叫......”“铁心你干什么呀,大惊小怪的!”“你....你,你们看,我们又回到出发的那条小溪了!” 
    阿雷:“不会吧!怎.....怎么会这样?” 
    问天:“你们看,那儿还有阿雪滑下去时留下的痕迹!” 
    阿雪:“真的耶!那我们该怎么办?难道我们真的走不出去了吗,我可不要一辈子呆在这个鬼地方!”说着说着,阿雪哭了。一边哭一边念叨着:“我不要、我不要,我要爸爸、我要妈妈、我不要死在这个地方.......呜呜...呜.....” 
    铁心:“不要哭了姐姐,总会有办法的,老天不会那么绝情的,我们今晚先在这休息一晚吧,明天再研究怎么回事。” 
    问天:“只有这样了,大家快休息吧!” 

    下集预告:大家满怀信心的想走出森林,但却在原地转圈圈,着到底是怎么一会事呢?难道他们真的一辈子呆在那吗经过问天和铁心的反复思考,终于知道了原因,这还要谢谢星星的指导呢!想知道这是怎么一回事吗?那么就请关注我们下集的精彩内容。


    6楼2008-07-10 13:33
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      9楼2008-07-21 09:29
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            与夜莺分享着这黯然的美丽    


        10楼2008-07-21 18:38
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          你支持天心、天灵还是天雪呢?来投票吧! 
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          11楼2008-07-31 19:07
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            12楼2009-03-30 19:38
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                  15楼2009-05-08 21:44
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                    快点写啊


                    17楼2009-05-14 20:43
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                      天心王道!天雪亡道!


                      18楼2009-05-14 20:46
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                        天心天心天心天心


                        19楼2009-05-14 20:46
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                            LZ弃坑了吗~?


                            21楼2009-07-13 11:36
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                              支持下....不过好像有一个7文的...........


                              22楼2009-07-31 13:20
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