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吧友们看下我这个句子正确吗

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This system is more fair than before, which the applicants could get a good chance to show their ability as long as they are the capable person


IP属地:陕西1楼2016-05-22 10:39回复
    more fair改成fairer,which改成inwhich


    IP属地:江苏来自Android客户端2楼2016-05-22 10:44
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      person改成people


      IP属地:江苏来自Android客户端3楼2016-05-22 10:45
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        more fair这种说法并没有错因为奥巴马某次演讲用过


        IP属地:北京来自Android客户端4楼2016-05-22 11:18
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          支持 more fair , 但不支持汉式


          IP属地:北京来自Android客户端5楼2016-05-22 12:39
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            which不对


            6楼2016-05-22 12:40
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              這句話如果讓我說,我會講:
              This system is better than before, the applicants could get a good chance to show their ability as long as they are capable people.


              IP属地:美国来自iPhone客户端7楼2016-05-22 13:08
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                需要我来指正么,微信号1604683217


                8楼2016-05-22 13:16
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