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新人,文笔不好,中文很烂,注意一下吧。
标题是德语的“我亲爱的”。
因为我对德文会比较熟悉啊,而且这句话自我感觉很温柔。
事先声明一下,因为我的翻译最近不在。所以会先用英文写,非常抱歉,中文没办法。
过一段时间我会发翻译的。


来自Android客户端1楼2016-06-18 22:50回复
    Introduction
    Gott im himmel hat an allen seine lust sein wohlgefallen.
    Kennt auch dich und hat dich lieb.


    来自Android客户端2楼2016-06-18 22:53
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      哦。也许我可以帮你先生?顶替你的翻译一段时间?(但是只能是英文(sigh


      来自iPhone客户端3楼2016-06-18 23:01
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        Enge
        Chapter one
        For you ,a thousand times over.
        Alfred is his usual self today .
        This is a summer,what a windy day.
        The darkness sink deep into the daylight.This is the best time of day for cooking breakfast by the window.
        His lover is sleeping.
        The wind carries away the tinkling of bell.
        Alfred has got the breakfast waiting before the sun come up a thin cloud.
        In the shade of the garden path some fresh-blown roses are sweet as hymns.


        来自Android客户端4楼2016-06-18 23:03
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          很不理解为什么中文很烂


          IP属地:天津来自Android客户端5楼2016-06-18 23:20
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            He spend time on wiping the rose-speckled china cup expecting to buy a bunch of poppy or one hyacinth plant as he used to.
            Sunlit gardens outside the window.
            "There are nothing like a bowl of pot marigold to be satisfactory ."He break into a chuck ."I think I'd,H'm,still have some Schillermein and cheese to buy.Perhaps Shropshire Blue is the right thing to take.
            The lad laugh heartily at his own joke.
            "I think ."Alfred speak up,smiling so that his glassed slipped.
            Well,this comes as a bit silly.
            The trees are turning green and the summer is young .
            Alfred sit at his window,where a beauty stops for a moment ,smeils to him and goes.
            Early on the sunny morning there can be nothing better.
            A flock of birds a warbling merrily in the eucalyptus trees.
            Then he realized ,this is the time of waking his love up.


            来自Android客户端6楼2016-06-18 23:37
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              百度说有敏感词只能发图片了


              IP属地:山东来自iPhone客户端7楼2016-06-19 20:44
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                眼熟楼主


                8楼2016-06-19 20:56
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                  楼主好像很厉害的样子:DEnglish我只有初中水平(初三),有点选择死亡的感觉:D
                  而且感觉是很温馨的文的感觉:D加油!!


                  IP属地:安徽来自Android客户端9楼2016-06-20 14:43
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                    哇感觉好棒!喜欢,期待翻译君翻译啦


                    IP属地:上海来自Android客户端10楼2016-06-20 22:20
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                      没有跟楼主提前打招呼就擅自翻了一点,原文很流畅很馥郁美感,但我的水平有限实在翻不出那种感觉,只怕再尝试贴近反而东施效颦了……在这里先对楼主说声抱歉,如果有哪里觉得不妥的请告诉我,或者删掉也是没问题的
                      当然。如果楼主不介意的话,我也很乐意继续翻下去的,直到楼主的翻译回来为止


                      IP属地:广西来自iPhone客户端11楼2016-06-23 00:08
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                        Continued from the preceding part.
                        his breast is filled with gladness this moment like the sunny silence of the morning upon the coloured glass.
                        Alfred hums song halfway to his loved one.
                        It has white walls with inlaid marquetry and the peeling paint on the cellings are decorated the same colour.
                        Shadow,with space in the house drawn.
                        Alfred walked out on the stair,which are covered a Persian rug that has an overela boratein,in a hurry.
                        The time wore on and the summer warmth.
                        It is all very beautiful.
                        Alfred moving toward his loved one.
                        His mind keep flashing back to the past time with his partner.
                        The pair of lovers have already been in a romance for a blest amount of time.
                        Vanish in sweet lips and kisses.Throw arms round the neck and tightly hug.
                        Love meant flowers ,more than indescribably loveliness.
                        Alfred suddely remember something that he show his teeth in a prissy grin."Englisher never showed any consideration for someone else's feeling."He has developed a slight Germany


                        来自Android客户端13楼2016-06-23 21:58
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                          IP属地:广西来自iPhone客户端15楼2016-06-24 00:04
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                            accent.
                            He can't help a suppressed giggle,then give a fierce look deliberately.
                            "I'm afraid my most embarrassing moment would be to have my phone go off in front of my countrymen."joke Alfred"I'm a little muddied-my mobile phone rightone is "Pompand Circums!"
                            A little way below the first-floor bed room is a window made of walnut and crotch mahogany displays artworks.
                            Althought it's none of this is ever his own.
                            "I lose my heart to an Englisher.Aye,an American fall in love with a Briton."
                            Soon afterwards,breaking into a smile,he say,"Love is merely a madness.
                            Alfred's sweetheart is scarcely a somecollector.
                            And most lets his fiance be proud ,is the HMS Victory.
                            "My delicious envy."
                            More the once he is very jealous to hear his partner has a flaming row with the Franch.


                            16楼2016-06-24 13:40
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                              唉嘿,不错的帖子√


                              20楼2016-06-26 15:48
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