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1217大作文是Some people think getting old is entirely bad. However, others think that life of the elderly in modern world is much easier than in the past. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
我说老年人生活现在更好了。立论1，因为他们有更好社会地位。原因:他们有丰富人生和工作经验。例子，很多公司聘请它们给年轻人做指导。立论2.可以参加很多社会活动，帮助街坊邻居，获得成就感和满足感
驳论:的确一些人老年人身体不好，高昂的医疗费用给家庭增加了负担。但是政府现在建立了全面的医疗体系，可以给他们付钱。他们自己也去兼职可以支付自己的医疗费用。
驳论段大概记得有部分是这样写的:However,some people argue that old generation are physically fragile and are vulnerable to some diseases, which arouses much financial pressure under the roof. It is true that to some degrees,much money has to be dedicated to maintaining their health and curing their diseases.However,they are oversimplifying the situation. In fact,政府怎样怎样...
我结构上没有问题，语言觉得没有出太多错，就是觉得有点偏题了。是不是偏题了就不可能上6了呀？
1217大作文是Some people think getting old is entirely bad. However, others think that life of the elderly in modern world is much easier than in the past. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
我说老年人生活现在更好了。立论1，因为他们有更好社会地位。原因:他们有丰富人生和工作经验。例子，很多公司聘请它们给年轻人做指导。立论2.可以参加很多社会活动，帮助街坊邻居，获得成就感和满足感
驳论:的确一些人老年人身体不好，高昂的医疗费用给家庭增加了负担。但是政府现在建立了全面的医疗体系，可以给他们付钱。他们自己也去兼职可以支付自己的医疗费用。
驳论段大概记得有部分是这样写的:However,some people argue that old generation are physically fragile and are vulnerable to some diseases, which arouses much financial pressure under the roof. It is true that to some degrees,much money has to be dedicated to maintaining their health and curing their diseases.However,they are oversimplifying the situation. In fact,政府怎样怎样...
我结构上没有问题，语言觉得没有出太多错，就是觉得有点偏题了。是不是偏题了就不可能上6了呀？
