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本文为FanFiction上一位智霞文新手所作。
原著设定略崩。
带译者(即本人)智霞瞬遥感情色彩的注。
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1楼2017-02-25 13:07回复
    我一直在等待
    原著:KAORI
    翻译:3H3HHAI
    校正:勇者ACE
    简单的短篇。小智十七岁,现在他在等待与小霞无意间在某处碰头。小智有一些一直想说的事情要对她说。智霞之恋、智霞。作者的第一个宝可梦的故事。
    评级:小说K+ -英语-浪漫-词:1212评论:6收藏:5:1发布时间:2007年12月13日状态:完整编号:3942075
    作者的话
    哦,只是一个我真的想写的“愚蠢”的短篇。我爱智霞。我想为这对CP写文已有三年了。这个镜头发生在未来7年,小智17岁。
    哦,我语法不太好!我不知道该在哪里用逗号停顿!我很努力写出了这篇文章,希望你能读完……
    这是我第一次写口袋同人短文!
    译者的话(3H3HHAI)
    这是本人汉化的第二篇智霞短篇小说,来源Fan Fiction站。(http://www.fanfiction.net
    希望各位喜欢~
    口袋同人(即Pokeshipping)是外站上智霞同人文与同人图的总称。
    本文智爷情商爆表,先虐后甜型。
    欢迎各位写文评~
    ________________________________________
    小智的POV。(POV即Point of view, 视角。本文“我”是智爷,“你”是霞殿——译者注)
    你回来看我的那天我不知道自己在期待什么。这似乎是十年以来,我们两人再次看到彼此的眼睛。我会承认我很紧张。我不知道你现在怎么看待我,因为我变好了,也变坏了。现在我站在这里,我们计划在今天见面……我们两个在几年前第一次见面的地方,同样的地方,我遇到了非常特别的你。(即关东地区1号道路的河边——译者注)信不信由你,你是我第一个暗恋的女孩……(智爷情商谜之高……——译者内心)我必须说,虽然我们当时都是年轻无知,但我知道我们有一天会从一个听起来很疯狂乃至愚蠢的小暗恋,但然后,它会附加更多的东西。有一天,我相信它会发芽。我们是最好的朋友,我有一种感觉,我们总是偷偷地让对方心动,因此我们总是无意间处于针尖对麦芒的状态。(啧啧啧……火箭队没有说错……——译者内心)现在我总是回想这些。那些是美好的时光,我生命中最美好的时光……我的旅程和梦想在那时开始。但正如人们所说的,一切美好的事情都会提前结束,就像那一天来得比我想象的还要早。那天是可怕的。我仍然不明白为什么,但我想我会失去你的好以及你再也见不到我,我们会永远失去联系一类的事情。那一天,当我们三个人分道扬镳,开始追逐我们自己的梦想,当我们都走了,我开始哭泣,因为我觉得我失去了另一个自我。你对我的意义比你想象的要多得多,我想你也会把这些感觉反馈给我。即使从来没有说过或表示出来,我们都知道,这份感情的确存在,我们只是没有足够的勇气或信心来表达,但现在我知道了。已经快七年了,我站在这里等着你以重新开始新的旅程,这次只有你和我。这次我不会退缩,因为在我遇到的所有女孩中,你对我的影响最大。我现在轻叹这些的同时风正在吹拂在我凌乱的黑发。(有一种说法:智爷的头发是墨绿色)我凝视着天空,现在多云阴沉,和以前一样。我傻笑着,仍然和以前一样,为你的到来而紧张。
    “……小智 ?”我听到有人在说话。我突然意识到这熟悉的声音,是你。
    我微笑着抬头看到了你那我已爱上了多年的碧绿色的眼睛。(原文为蔚蓝色cerulean,为符合霞殿形象改为碧绿色。不过华蓝市的英文即是Cerulean City,作者可能语义双关。——译者注)
    “好久不见,小霞。“我又一次侧眼看了看你,你依然像以前一样美。你的头发还是橘色,虽然现在已经长发及肩。(正如作者所说作者语法不好,连用了but与though,根据文意译者已稍作调整——译者注)你成熟了,并且更美了。
    “小遥怎样了?”你说的话简明扼要的切中要点,头低了下来。
    (瞬:小智!你想怎样?!
    霞:小智!你想怎样?!
    智:我是无辜的!作者硬要拉我的QAQ!
    译者:好了好了……把智宫理论丢掉……)
    我慢慢地呼吸,凝视着多云的天空,不知何故,我知道你会先说这件事,“好吧,小霞,小遥和我……不再是一对男女朋友了”我不想谈论小遥,因为她使我远离了小霞你。(原文疑有错误,you 和 me 颠倒导致语句不通,译者已修改——译者注)三年前你回来看我时意外地看到我吻她……(译者把瞬君安抚下来……)虽然这是件愚蠢的事,但和她约会是唯一能让我忘记你的方法。我讨厌看到你伤心,看到我与小遥在一起。我感到很内疚,我唯一能做的就是和她分手,即使我对你总是有点粗鲁,对你显得冷酷无情,但是我和她分手是因为你更重要。(智爷一副情场老手样子——译者内心)
    “你和她分手了吗?小智……但你爱过她……(原文为过去时,“爱”可能表示“曾经爱”——译者注)“你说话时你的眼睛盯着你的脚,一阵凉风吹来,你裹紧你的外套使得它更靠着你的身体,你看起来非常困惑。(原文为confused and puzzled,二者皆表示“困惑”,故合并——译者注)
    “小霞,我当时是愚蠢和年轻。我没有坠入爱河。你可以说我被自己的愚蠢蒙蔽了双眼,没有看到……我分手了……我和小遥分手了……“(译者再次安抚瞬君……)我再一次凝视着你,想在告诉你这件事的时候看你的眼睛。你抬了抬头,当我叹了口气,说“为了你小霞”时你的眉毛困惑的皱起。
    你大吃一惊,纤细的手捂着嘴,不知道该说什么或做什么。
    我把手放在我的口袋里后走近你,俯身向你,把手放在你的嘴上。(如作者所说这句毫无停顿,译者按行文思路稍作了语序修改——译者注)
    “小智…我…我很抱歉。”你把手挡在嘴前,喃喃地说。(即傲娇地拒绝智爷的吻——译者注)
    “嘘,这一切(代小遥事件等——译者安抚着瞬君注)不过是过去的事情。小霞,这是现在,我在这里,在你身边,这现在的一切才对我有意义“我给了你一个小小的微笑,你的眼睛闪闪发光,——即使是在今天这个多云的天——令我惊讶的是,我用我的右手捧着你的脸,我的目光在你的眼睛上。
    “这是稍纵即逝的机会……”我想。(即如果现在不吻霞殿就再也没有机会了——译者注)
    我俯身向内,慢慢地吻你的嘴唇。吻是我期待的一切。你的嘴唇看起来柔软而细腻。亲吻也许很简单,但带着吻的感情却不是那样。
    我重新站直,笑了,“我为这个已经等待了七年,小霞”(啧啧啧——译者内心)
    你没有说一句话;你只是站在那里,嘴角上扬,泪水从你绿色的眼睛流淌。(原文为蓝色,参见上面的注——译者注)
    你沉默着用双臂抱住我,我立刻予以回应。(即抱住霞殿——译者注)
    “我也是,小智……”你深呼吸着,“我也是…”(即霞殿也等了七年——译者注)
    ________________________________________
    作者后记
    我真的很喜欢这种(先虐后甜的文)!我希望别人也能写这样的文!;;
    (瞬君:你!再!说!一!遍!!
    译者:好了好了……我也不喜欢搞什么小三……)
    陈词滥调?愚蠢?哑巴?爱情的火焰将被忽视和无用。
    (译者:你说什么?!?!这么高情商的小智上哪儿找?!)
    请写文评!我真的很努力的写这篇文!
    为智霞短文而欢呼。挥舞智霞旗帜-嘿!
    ——END——


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      I've BeenWaiting
      By: KA0RI
      Translated by:3H3HHAI
      Checked by: Snow
      A fluffyoneshot. Ash is seventeen now and he's waiting for a visit with misty at thesame spot were the two unintentionally met. Ash has a few things to say to herthat he's been wanting to say. AAML Ash Misty. First Pokémon story.


      3楼2017-02-25 13:08
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        Rated: FictionK+ - English - Romance - Words: 1,212 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 1 -Published: Dec 13, 2007 - Status: Complete - id: 3942075
        Oh, just a sillyone shot that I really wanted to do. I love AAML. I've wanted to do a one shotof this couple for about three years now. This one shot takes place 7 years inthe future. Ash is 17.
        Oh I'm not verygood at grammar! I don't know where to put commas half the time sorry! I hopeyou still read it I worked hard!
        This is my firstPokémon Oneshot!
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          Ash's POV.
          The day you cameback to see me I didn't know what to expect. It seemed like almost a decadesince the two of us have seen each other eye to eye. I was nervous I'll admit.I didn't know what you'd think of me now because I've changed for both thebetter and the worse. Well now here I am standing here were we planned to meettoday...the same spot where the two of us first met years ago and the sameexact spot where I met someone very special... you. You're the first girl Iactually had a crush on believe it or not, I must say we were both young andclueless but I knew we had something going from day one as crazy as it sounds.It may have seemed to be a stupid little crush back then but it was attached tosomething much more someday, I just knew it would. We were best friends and Ihad a feeling that we were secretly always crushing on each other since the daywe unintentionally met always flirting and teasing. It was really obvious nowthat I look back at it actually. Those were the good times, some of the bestyears of my life….just starting my journeys and dreams. But as they say allgood things come to an end and as did that day came sooner than I thought too.That day was horrible. I still didn't understand why but I felt that I wouldloose you for good. That you'd never see me again and we'd loose contactforever. I felt on that day when the three of us split to take our separateways to start our own dreams that when we all departed I started to cry becauseI felt that I lost apart of myself. You meant so much more to me than youthought, and I think you would have returned those feelings too. Even if theywere never said or shown, we both knew that those feelings were there. We justdidn't have enough courage or confidence to say those feelings but now I do...Iknow I do. Now it's nearly seven years later and here and I am standing waitingfor you to start over on a new journey, this time with only you and I. You maynot know it yet but I'll tell you this time, I'll make sure. I'm not going toback down this time, because out of all the girls I've met, you're the one whohas had the greatest impact on me. I'm sighing now as the wind is breezingthrough my same old' messy black hair. I stare at the sky, cloudy and overcast.Same as it was all this time ago. I smirk, still nervous as ever for yourarrival.
          "…Ash?"I hear a voice speak out. Startled for a brief moment I then realize that thevoice is very familiar. I know it's you.
          I grin and lookup to meet with your cerulean colored eyes that I've grown to love throughoutthe years.
          "Long timeno see Misty." I glace at you once more, you're still beautiful as usual.Your hair is still that same orange color, though now it's not in a ponytail,but now it's down just barely an inch below your shoulders. You've matured andonly grown more beautiful.
          "How'sMay?" You say short and to the point, your head hung low.
          I exhale slowlyand stare at the cloudy sky knowing that somehow I knew you were going to saythis first, "Well, May and I…well were not a couple anymore Misty." Ihate talking about May because it's the thing that drove you away from meMisty. The day you came back three years ago to see me unexpected and you sawme kissing her, it was a foolish thing to do, but dating her was the only thingto get my mind off of you. I hate seeing you sad, and seeing me with May did. Ifelt so guilty that the only thing I could do was I break up with her for you,even if I was always a bit rude to you and appeared heartless to you. I brokeup with her for you because you matter more.
          "Y-Y-Youbroke up with her? Ash…but you loved her…" You said your eyes staring atyour feet; you wrap your coat tighter around your body as a cool breeze blewin, your face looking confused and puzzled.
          "Misty, Iwas foolish and young. I wasn't in love. I guess you could say I was blinded bymy own stupidity and didn't see that…that…I broke…I broke up with Mayfor..." I stared at you once more, wanting to see eye to eye while tellingyou this. You then looked up your eyebrows knitted in confusion as Isighed," for you Misty..."


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            You gaspedshocked, your delicate hand covering your mouth not sure what to say or do.
            I walked closerto you my hands placed in my pockets I leaned over towards you as I placed myhand on yours covering your mouth.
            "Ash...I…I'msorry. Oh-"You muttered through your hand guarding your mouth.
            "Shh,that's all but a thing of the past. Misty, this is now and I'm here with youright now and that's all that matters to me." I gave a small smile as youreyes shone even on today of the cloudiest days, another thing that amazed meabout you. I cupped your face with my right hand, my eyes locked in with yours.
            "It's nowor never…" I thought.
            I leaned inwardsand slowly placed a kiss on your lips. The kiss was everything I expected andmore. Your lips were soft and delicate as they looked. The kiss may have beensimple, but the emotion with the kiss was anything but that.
            I pulled backand smiled, "I've waited seven years for this Misty…"
            You didn't say aword; you just stood there with your mouth half smiling and tears flowing fromyour cerulean colored eyes.
            Speechless youwrapped your arms around me for a hug and I immediately returned the gesture.
            "Me too Ash…"You breathed, "Me too…"
            ________________________________________
            Well I reallyenjoyed this! I hope someone else did too! ;;
            Cliché? Stupid?Dumb? Flames will be ignored and useless.
            Please Review! Ireally did try on this!
            yay for AAMLfluff. -waves her ash and misty banner- heh.


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              译者注释
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              勇者兄给了我一些改进建议,不料本人太糊涂……
              我的一些瞬遥类私货各位无视啊……千万别介意……
              不好意思……


              7楼2017-02-25 13:16
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                找一些人来暖一暖吧
                @风清墨迹
                @q小兰猫猫p
                @windy樱花的梦
                @lhy瓦尔迪
                @白云酿


                8楼2017-02-25 13:19
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                  帮你暖个贴


                  IP属地:山东来自Android客户端9楼2017-02-25 13:20
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                    up


                    来自Android客户端10楼2017-02-25 13:28
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                      帮暖。


                      来自Android客户端11楼2017-02-25 17:14
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                        暖贴,不过个人觉得这篇比上篇差一丢丢


                        来自Android客户端12楼2017-02-25 18:12
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                          额,我的吐槽就不要说了,我怕挨打


                          IP属地:陕西来自Android客户端13楼2017-02-25 18:37
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                            小瞬表示有句妈卖批我不知道当讲不当讲。


                            IP属地:陕西来自iPhone客户端14楼2017-02-25 20:21
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                              呃…私心建议翻译过程中最好不要添加过多的,与正文内容并没有太大关系的注解


                              IP属地:日本来自Android客户端15楼2017-02-25 20:27
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