Climbing upon the cliff in an evening,laying on those amazing rocks and watching the bright and warm sun disappearing from the sky is such a joyful thing to do.
老师说我前面几个并列的后面只能用are such joyful things 这里用is不行吗？
以及这句还有什么语法错误吗
另外，A place in which is at its most enchanting under the evening sunshine，full of magic and warmth—-isn't that enough for everybody to pay a visit?这样表达可以吗？
老师说in which后面那个要改成什么A place at most enchanting beauty is magical还是啥啥的 可是我觉得我那个in which 后面的句子没问题的啊？
老师说我前面几个并列的后面只能用are such joyful things 这里用is不行吗？
以及这句还有什么语法错误吗
另外，A place in which is at its most enchanting under the evening sunshine，full of magic and warmth—-isn't that enough for everybody to pay a visit?这样表达可以吗？
老师说in which后面那个要改成什么A place at most enchanting beauty is magical还是啥啥的 可是我觉得我那个in which 后面的句子没问题的啊？
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